I don't care HOW good the animation is. If you want people to take you seriously as a talented Newgrounds creator, you REALLY need to add sound effects. Right now it just feels very bland.
I don't care HOW good the animation is. If you want people to take you seriously as a talented Newgrounds creator, you REALLY need to add sound effects. Right now it just feels very bland.
That’s fair. Truthfully I don’t know much in sound editing let alone equipment and programs for sound. Also working 2 jobs while trying to animate hardly leaves me any time to sleep or practice or study sound. YouTube i need that YouTube ad revenue so I can quit my second job to have time to look into it.
Oh God, Those stock clipart things. Don't really blend very well with 3D piranhas
You're right. My priority is to make an animation film as quickly as possible, so I have no other choice. It is not a high-quality animation film. How is the original story?
Definitely worth spending two hours trying to type all that credits from the TV.
Interesting twist to an otherwise very simple comic strip. I think the part where the protagonist flies into space was pretty nice. Not 'THE GREATEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN!!!!!!', but still unexpected and better than the original,
This is because he only has one frame tweened around during the entire sequence (just after he pushes the lid over the well). As someone who used that trick extensively in my first year of making cartoons, I find it to be an astronomical time-saver (no pun intended). Not that it saves much since your jump from comic to animation barely go over 15 seconds, not counting the new ending.
SUGGESTED IDEAS:
Link the original comic in the description. Trying to find the original comic you based this animation on was very difficult since I have to skim through 160+ of them on your website just to find it.
(For anyone asking: it's comic #48: Well. https://bigfootjustice.com/comic/well/)
~frog~
For all intents and purposes, this is basically a comic dub. I know they don't take a lot of effort and people don't tend to appreciate them winning awards without at least some touch-ups in the animation department. Glad to see you know what you're doing.
But what ELSE are you gonna do. It's Black Friday! Black girl wants her new PS5 and Xbox.
SUGGESTED IDEAS:
Trim down the outro. It takes up half the video space.
~frog~
I turned these Minions into a TACO! Funniest shit I've ever seen!
You did a great job rebooting one of your oldest characters in music form. I also appreciate how you redid some scenes from the original GIFs on your website in your current (if not slightly modified to remove outlines) style. I recognised these scenes:
Cinema: (ep 12)
Hospital (ep 5)
Bus stop (ep 4)
Lottery (ep 2)
Park (ep 6)
Oh chute! (ep 10)
Correct - he needed to be brought into this century :)
Jill of all trades.
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I do animation, music, games, art, the whole lot.
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Currently working on "Project Mystopia", the biggest game on Newgrounds, probably.
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