CrimsonKero's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chocnoon - Through My Life (DXXV)]

Is it just me or are you starting off each song with the same cymbal crash each time?

MWMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM responds:

Maybe it's just you.

[The Newgrounds F Collab]

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Fuggeftionf:

Fome timeftampf pleafe.

MYYA responds:

done

[Two Is OK.]

1978 you say? This might make this the oldest recorded song ever published on Newgrounds.

Though what you did to it in the 34 years since is unclear. The description said you re-recorded the song, but one of the replies said all you did was convert the original recording to a digital format on your computer without needing to rework it.

And yes, I can tell that Pink Floyd is a likely inspiration. How involved were you in the original recording?

gamejunkie responds:

It was written & recorded in 1978 (without vocals) by a close friend. He was going through some of his old stuff & found this & a number of other pieces, so we got together & reworked them a little, add a little bit here & there with a Midi & added the Vocals (me) & this is what we ended up with. To be honest neither of us had much idea of what we were doing (with the Midi) at the time. You'll have to forgive me, it was 11 years ago & my memory is'nt what it used to be. My partner in crime has also passed since we done this. RIP J.S.

[Sunshine Lima Bean (Best Before Dec 15 2023)]

I saw everything:

Run off like that again and I'm cutting your channel allowance to 4.

[Everything is Racist]

This is definitely an old song:

Though, you can still replace "2017" with any other year after that and it'll still work.

[Chocnoon - Chinese Dragon (CCCXLV)]

Looking at what Random-storykeeper said about the original:

1. Composition is good, and so is the overall theme.
2. RSK said the mixing of the original was all over the place and I agree with her. I'd also say the mixing is still pretty busted here too.

Overall, it's a worthy sequel, though still not without its flaws. If I can give some advice, it's this.

Pay attention to the tones of each instrument. Don't oversaturate any one tone, Maybe also don't maximise the volume of each instrument. If any of the instruments are difficult to decipher, or secondary instruments drown out the primary ones, you're doing it wrong.
EQ filters + Note filters are your best friends.

Offtopic suggestion: Share the BeepBox/JummBox links in the author comments. You can embed the link into another piece of text if it's too long.

MWMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM responds:

I always forget to lower the mix. I can make a modification of all files to a desirable mix in mp3cut, and I'll try to make the volume of future songs lower.

[Shane face]

Amazing work, though it's a tiny bit ear-grating (It usually grows on me).

Are you ok if I use this in an animation?
~AF

[look to the road]

This wasn't here before?

I don't have much to say, I just like it. The bone rattles add a really nice touch to the composition.

SUGGESTIONS:
Try not to lose stuff like this again.

frog