CrimsonKero's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chocnoon - Chinese Dragon (CCCXLV)]

Looking at what Random-storykeeper said about the original:

1. Composition is good, and so is the overall theme.
2. RSK said the mixing of the original was all over the place and I agree with her. I'd also say the mixing is still pretty busted here too.

Overall, it's a worthy sequel, though still not without its flaws. If I can give some advice, it's this.

Pay attention to the tones of each instrument. Don't oversaturate any one tone, Maybe also don't maximise the volume of each instrument. If any of the instruments are difficult to decipher, or secondary instruments drown out the primary ones, you're doing it wrong.
EQ filters + Note filters are your best friends.

Offtopic suggestion: Share the BeepBox/JummBox links in the author comments. You can embed the link into another piece of text if it's too long.

MWMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM responds:

I always forget to lower the mix. I can make a modification of all files to a desirable mix in mp3cut, and I'll try to make the volume of future songs lower.

[Shane face]

Amazing work, though it's a tiny bit ear-grating (It usually grows on me).

Are you ok if I use this in an animation?

[look to the road]

This wasn't here before?

I don't have much to say, I just like it. The bone rattles add a really nice touch to the composition.

SUGGESTIONS:
Try not to lose stuff like this again.

frog

[the sound of the worm caves]

== Five worms out of ten!==
Score: 5 | Critic Review

This is a lot of users, including some you already know, including some within the 1K-4K follower range and including non-voice actors, all saying 'worm'. It's monotonous, but that's the whole concept.
I don't know how many 'worms' were spoken in this 25 second submission, but the description (of which I had to break up all the 'worms' that weren't spaced, presumably from a botched copy paste) has a total of 2,458 worms, and NO I am not pasting all that!

Also one thing I noticed is that on the top left sidebar, it's telling me @worm hasn't been scouted yet, even though they ain't on the credits page. Turns out you sent a credit request to a user called worm, a user who hasn't been online since 2005 and hadn't accepted the request.

On a closing note, what would make this more interesting could be if you took all those 'worm' voice clips and pitched them to make an original song.

Composition: 4 | Concept: 7 | Amount of which the novelty's worn thin: 10 | Worms: At least 10

Shal responds:

worm

[Chord City]

== Lyrics hard to hear? ==
Score: 8 | Critic Review by Anonymous-Frog

Mixing is a little bit off. Only slightly. I also have trouble understanding the lyrics.
I understand it wasn't recorded with the 'best' equipment, and Audacity only got me so far cleaning that shit up, but a lyrics sheet would be very appreciated.

But still, I find this to be pretty atmospheric and I enjoy this nonetheless.

Composition: 9 | Mixing: 7 | Instruments: 10

[C32 - Undone]

Not too shabby. It's a little light as a dubstep beat, but I feel it gets the job done. Mind if I use this in a game?