Five votes you!
Five votes you!
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This is a really interesting mashup of characters from the 1993 Super Mario Bros film with their video game counterparts, although some of the characters are closer to their original video game counterparts. Are these custom-made?
SUGGESTED IDEAS:
Description has typos, and you could also maybe link to socials if you have any.
NOTES:
This was posted on YouTube last year.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pvDvtz5FoTY
~frog~
Yeah! I made the sprites as either edits or custom designs. I'll fix the typo, add socials.
I'm waiting for sound design for a new cartoom for duel release on here AND YouTube. I wanted to prime this account with content in the mean time.
I can accept the red shading as a custom Super Game Boy or GBC enhanced palette to suit the Castlevania-esque mood, but the Game Boy only has 4 colours. This has 6.
I tried but It's okay.
(and I know what I'm doing)
Fuck you too.
In all seriousness, that bit was to me, the funniest part of the animation. Nice little nod to when I criticised the previous 'Rigno Star Productions' video for being very rushed and unfunny compared to previous submissions. Shame I can't say the same thing for this video, the cycle's just gonna continue.
junya watanabe on my wri
slatt!
MEDIOCRE (2 / 5)
NEGATIVES:
- Extremely rough + rushed animation without colour.
- Very few sounds, aside from Chronos's (the man in the top hat) voice. All dialogue aside from him come from text
- Basic ovals and rectangles that makes 1 week look like 1 day.
- No music.
POSITIVES:
- Chronos is drawn a little better than everyone else, although he still seems a little off.
- Has the potential to be a good story if the above negatives were fixed.
INFO:
- 2 minutes long
- No colour, only black and white / couldn't be bothered to use the fill tool
Nearly 7 moths have gone by, but that does not matter. It wasn't made in a week as far as I remember. I storyboarded it for 5-6 days and then made in 1.5 days straight without sleep, so I definitely wasn't thinking straight when animating, but that's kind of an excuse. Happy to infrom that I now animate much better and faster :)
GOOD (3.5 / 5) (formerly NOT MUCH (2.5 / 5):
POSITIVE
- Portrays the kind of stuff that I'd expect from a post-apocalyptic story-driven game like the one you want to make.
- Lots of little bits lying around, great attention to detail.
NEGATIVE:
- No audio. You really need that if you want to give a good impression and get people to back your Kickstarter
EDIT: There's now audio. Changing my review.
INFO:
- Very gory. Not for the faint of heart.
- Simplistic lineless vector art style that's no longer ripping off South Park.
~frog~
My mistake, I saved it from my Youtube channel and didn't realise the audio didn't get saved with it for some reason. I have since replaced it and confirmed audio to be working, sorry about that!
OK (3/5)
A day in the life of a Rodite slave working in a Nerion owned mine. I would never want to work there, unless I was one of those Nerions
POSITIVE:
- Decent frame by frame animation with a ton of new frames. Most of the Nerions are uniquely designed as well.
- Great music that fits well with the setting. Where did you get that?
NEGATIVE:
- No sound effects.
- Jittery motion, especially noticeable on the tunnel walls.
INFO:
- 30 seconds long. Not too padded out.
- Very basic intro + outro title cards
~frog~
1. I made the music on Groove pad it was something that I made a long time ago and decided to use it since I didn't have time to make a new one (and my phone deleted the app without me knowing) It is a free app so try it when you have the time.
2. I wanted to put sound effects when I finished the animation but 1. My whip sound wasn't compatible with Power director 2. I wanted to ad my own sounds for the birds but again time was spent only on what was absolutely needed meaning only the animation.
3. intro/outro was last minute because I was too tired to animate that as well and again not enough time.
Speak now or forever hold your peace.
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