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For an animation made in 24 hours, I appreciate the effort, even if multiple people worked on this. I understand that sprite movies have been frowned upon by some Newgrounds users in the past, but I believe they should have just as much effort as non-sprite movies.
Most people making sprite movies back in the day would've been using pre-made / unedited sprites (either from the original games or fan-made) and even if they did use custom sprites, few actually made every single tiny movement (such as lip syncing, eye rolling, and in this case, biting into a mushroom) pixel-accurate and consistent, ie. actually make the sprites look good.

It definitely helps that you've had plenty of experience with hand-drawn animation before, from what I could find outside of Newgrounds.

Where the heck is that controller plugged into? Also, ouch!

Did you know: By downloading and examining the SWF file, you can find that this is an edited version of 'All Your Gates' by the same author. You can find unused images related to Bill Gates and Microsoft in the SWF.
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/76936

I just want to advise you not to post unfinished works on the Portal, instead use the Dumping Grounds.
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump

The voice is a LOT better, the main character doesn't look like bootleg Edd anymore, and the watermark's gone, but unfortunately it still takes place in a white void and the drawings are still rough and basic. I think you might need to remake this a third time.

DiegoToonz responds:

I really need to change the hoodie color.It fricken looks very similar!

The loop doesn't connect very well, most notably the 'NEW HIGH SCORE!!!' text, the 1s and 0s ascending, and also the red + blue sprite that flies on the left.

This looks and feels like something Level UP would make.

I hope his ass is ok.

As I mentioned in your previous videos, and pretty much every other review here, you really need to add audio, especially when spoken dialogue is involved. The animation's good though.

As explained on a previous video, I understand you don't have time for that because you're working 2 jobs and you need YouTube's ad revenue to quit one of them, which isn't very sustainable. Can I suggest Patreon if you haven't used that already?

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