You made a good first impression with that Deltarune Dragon's Lair animation, but this one has those unmistakable, typical DeviantArt vibes, which not a lot of people on this site are into. Just a heads up.
You made a good first impression with that Deltarune Dragon's Lair animation, but this one has those unmistakable, typical DeviantArt vibes, which not a lot of people on this site are into. Just a heads up.
Although your employers wouldn't mind, for the sake of submitting this to Newgrounds, I have to give minus points for using Kevin MacLeod music, specifically "that one" which doesn't even fit.
Otherwise, great reel! A lot of high-profile stuff like with Yotta, Titmouse and such.
not enough RFK
Ah, the retro VHS filter. It's not a crappy 4-frame doodle, it's an aesthetic!
Red undershirt and a pixie cut.
I thought he had a tie and a flat top.
Just so you know, you can edit and swap out the video from the original upload and republish it.
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/943039
oh i did not know that! Thank you!
I'm not one to talk, but both outfits look like ass.
Hahaha well, they show too much ass, it's an ass outfit
I haven't seen a cartoon this stiff and lifeless since my internet shut off in the middle of a Family Guy marathon.
Yeah, this is barely animated. Not even voiced.
But even for a motion comic the drawings look sketchy and unpolished, sort of like an animatic, the only real effect is a fade-in/out between panels. I get that this is probably your first time making this sort of stuff, and there is potential, it just needs to be bigger and better.
Appreciate the feedback!
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